Brutally amazing.

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I've got a secret,
_{It's on the tip of my tongue, It's on the back of my lungs,}
and I've got to keep it,
_{I know something you don't know.}

i like your little poems =]
they remind me of crank, if you've ever read it.

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_{...'Till human voices wake us, and we drown.}

That's amazing.

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To live in hearts we leave behind is not to die.

Scary, yet it shows the truth of this subject.
^^

I know too many people in such similar situations...*sighs*. It's horrible that it happens.

I like that you showed both male and female sides of it; most people put females down for sexual abuse and males down for physical abuse. Having the "You're so easy you're my slut you're my whore" on the male side really shows the unfortunate reality. I like the way the two match up but don't...and once again you're a master of placement. Where you put each stanza physically with "abused" in the center at the bottom...really adds to the whole effect.

I understand about every once in a while being able to do poetry and having a few days of just...inspiration. But you're much better than I am when I have my inspiration.

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We lie beneath the sea, stars lapping at our feet. I lie to you; you lie to me; we lie beneath the sea.

See?

I heard somewhere it's a poets job to paint a picture with words...
you've done this most excellently.
I dunno how else to describe it..

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´´Λ__Λ``
= (• w • ) =
--O----O--

Sonic sez that's NO good!

O_O

And you've said I'm good.

-shakes head-

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_{"i hide behind these words
but i'm coming out"}

What can I say load and painfully clear....I love how you formated it this great but againg mournfully true

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Every moment of our existances we are slowly and gradually...dying

"It is said that every man has his own niche in this world...If that is true I guess it could be said that I have yet to find mine..."

sad

Eh, not bad.

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"That is because the English language is my BITCH, and I bend it to my wishes accordingly..." -T