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memoirs of a broken boy by *Miss-Deathwish:iconMiss-Deathwish:


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Author's Comments

DO NOT USE THIS PIECE ANYWHERE WITHOUT MY WRITTEN PERMISSION. serious consequences will occur.

this was written from a boy's perspective - which might not be clear - but it is, really.
-- you can take it however you want, though.

skin is like glass, easy to break and hard to mend.
hearts aren't, because you can't fix them.

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

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:iconsilverkaname:
Wow, thats so sad. It's beautiful though.

--
I don't suffer from insanity, but enjoy every minute of it.

~Edgar Allan Poe~
:iconlovelinhdor:
<3
lovely. as always :heart:

--
Linhdor ~
:iconeaglewarrio9:
No.11 is beautiful.
:iconbing-bam-boom:
The last line pulls everything together so well.
I love your writing. It's always so creative and unique.

"‘But you are the most broken boy I know,’ he’d said, and it took everything I had not to cry. Mostly because he’d been the one to break me."
I absolutely love that line.
<3


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we're crashing cars we used to share.
:iconlelu-sunshine:
There is something very magic about your writing.
:iconangeleyes-ltd:
wow...that was beautiful.

Every line was visual.

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Miss Mena <3

--[link] --
:iconsilverstride:
" skin is like glass, easy to break and hard to mend.
hearts aren't, because you can't fix them. "

Is that really true, though? A heart can never be repaired so it's shiny and new and ready to start over, but it could be fixed enough to work properly, just with a few glitches.


--
Sabrina: FEED THE PENGUIN, BE THE PENGUIN. -serious look-
--
I am Ellen Hopkins in dA's Celebrities Crew!
:iconceliace:
You're so good at writing- putting things in a certain mood, which is something I struggle with.
Great, as usual.
I like that it ends at nineteen for some reason... maybe that it's not just twenty, seeming almost incomplete. I like that, but I'm not sure why.
I'm guessing you didn't mean to do it that way, but it's good.


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just another person living in the background of everyone's life.
:iconamertie:
this is insanely beautiful.

(broken things are usually beautiful.)
:iconbluemeadow193:
As usual. Beautiful. In so many ways. :]

Just like you.

Ahaha, not to sound creepy. Yet it's the truth.

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November 21, 2008
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