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milky ways and gin by *Miss-Deathwish:iconMiss-Deathwish:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open

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I wrote in a guy`s perspective, but I s`pose you can pretend it`s a girl speaking if that makes you feel better. But it`s really told by a boy about a boy. Big surprise there, right? ;]
(And also - I know Captain Morgan is rum, but gin sounded nicer in the title. ^^; )

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Friendship > relationship?

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~Ell-A-Phant Oct 5, 2008, 2:22:29 PM
i find this very deep. c:
nice job! ♥
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~violatskies Oct 5, 2008, 2:23:15 PM
the things you write are so pretty and thoughtful. <3

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~AHurtSoul Oct 5, 2008, 2:24:24 PM
Crap, you made me cry. I loved it :heart:

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~airisall Oct 5, 2008, 2:28:38 PM
I normally don't read any of the literature on this site, but this really caught my attention and held onto it to the end. I think you've done a wonderful job. It's beautiful.
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~little-miss-morbid Oct 5, 2008, 2:29:15 PM
its very deep and kinda unusual, i like it

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~child-proof Oct 5, 2008, 2:46:54 PM
well done :]

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"it is if everyone dies alone."
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~polkadot-sweets Oct 5, 2008, 2:57:15 PM
this is great!

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~TwilightGaiden Oct 5, 2008, 3:24:11 PM
Sounds nice.

The only critique I have is that "you'd" sounds awkward as I am pretty sure it isn't actually a contraction for "you had".

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- I used to put crappy lyrics here but I grew out of that. So, I'll just put a lion here instead: >:3
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~Greylights Oct 5, 2008, 3:35:23 PM
girls have husky laughs? O_O love your storytelling =D
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*Miss-Deathwish Oct 5, 2008, 3:59:23 PM
Haha noo! The narrator is a boy talking about a boy. ^^

& thank you :]

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