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note to selves by *Miss-Deathwish:iconMiss-Deathwish:

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DO NOT USE THIS PIECE ANYWHERE WITHOUT MY WRITTEN PERMISSION. serious consequences will occur.

it's easiest to see the flaws in others that you share with them.

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Mood: Love ~Uncensored-Control Nov 7, 2008, 6:07:00 PM
"Maybe you thought it was okay, but one day you wake up and notice that the paint is peeling off of your ceiling and that your bedroom is fucking freezing even though it’s the middle of July and that the walls really do lack any sort of decoration."

It's all too easy to see each others flaws at times :/


This one goes straight to the :+fav:'s :]
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~simplyjessxx Nov 7, 2008, 6:11:31 PM
I absolutely adore everything you write, the way you have with words makes me jealous.

You are something to aspire to.

:+fav:

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i've got those rolled back eyes, but nothing's clouding my vision.
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Mood: Love ~Greylights Nov 7, 2008, 6:12:37 PM
what a masterpiece :)
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~Shyki Nov 7, 2008, 6:13:23 PM
A very inspirational written piece. I really wish I could write this good. But I don't have any time.

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And all I could hear was her melodious laughter.
And all I could feel was the whisper of the wind.
And all I could see was an angels smile.
As the heavens painted her wings the color of a rainbow.
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~Second-Person-Point Nov 7, 2008, 6:20:48 PM
It's wonderful! :) And quite sad. :(
Also, I want to, but I can't add this to my favorites...!!! >.<

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What is my brain supposed to do, come up with something rational?
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~Ying-and-Yang-Inc Nov 7, 2008, 6:28:43 PM
Wow...I can relate to this. Well, some of them I can. :XD:

Beautiful piece.

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:star: I moved to a new account! :star:

Please :+devwatch: ~Onyx-Twilight if you want to follow my work. I'd appreciate it if you did. :meow:

My sister *Freya03 is taking commissions: [link]
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~ShinigamiKanilla Nov 7, 2008, 6:38:22 PM
I love it- can't explain why, but it makes my chest hurt to read this poem. Maybe, because it's just too true in itself.

Wonderful image with the purple candies...

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Let's flee to a bar in Amsterdam, my Kapitan
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~CyanideAndCake Nov 7, 2008, 6:39:08 PM
"Maybe you thought it was okay, but one day you wake up and notice that the paint is peeling off of your ceiling and that your bedroom is fucking freezing even though it’s the middle of July..."

:heart:

I love that part...it's so sad & poetic & beautiful...

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Peace is the way, & love is the movement.

*Official Founder of the Creeperhood* :D

Wanting to help you is a sin that my head keeps committing.
(November 3rd, 2007)
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~LacusDestiny Nov 7, 2008, 6:40:16 PM
"Maybe you’re the one who only eats the purple candies because they’re the prettiest, even though they taste like cough medicine.
You eat the red ones, too, but they taste like him, like cherries and sweet and whispers, and you decide that maybe you like the taste of cough medicine."

Amazing.
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~HEARTb0mb Nov 7, 2008, 6:44:32 PM
Amazing as always. I love it. : )

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