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statue child by *Miss-Deathwish:iconMiss-Deathwish:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Surrealism

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DO NOT USE THIS PIECE ANYWHERE WITHOUT MY WRITTEN PERMISSION. serious consequences will occur.

you are a child made of stone with no eyes
no eyes, no thoughts can grasp the idea of your heart as cold as winter
winter skin and cherry lips that open wide and scream
scream as loud as you can until your bones break
break your lungs and collapse to your knees to crawl
crawl as close to the shadows as your body will allow
allow your mind to wither and crumble away into ashes,
ashes, ashes, we all fall down.

(hmm-- tried something new. it's bizarre. don't mind it.)

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~weetp22 Jan 31, 2009, 10:58:49 AM
I really like the last two lines
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~50calWolf Jan 31, 2009, 11:00:24 AM
i like this, great work ^^

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~Silverstride Jan 31, 2009, 11:02:15 AM
Wonderful, Bailey.
Very unique style. :D I like it.

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~crystal-purr Jan 31, 2009, 11:02:53 AM
OMG!! thats so amazing!! :iconiloveitplz:
wooo :iconyayzplz: it gave me teh chills..
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=ecmb Jan 31, 2009, 11:06:01 AM
its really intense jaajja and sad
but its good:heart:

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=Fuzzi-Wuzzi Jan 31, 2009, 11:16:52 AM
Simply amazing. I love the simplicity of it. It's very powerful. And, I love the ending.
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~loverz116 Jan 31, 2009, 11:18:18 AM
i really like this poem. great job :)
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=SocraticSynapses Jan 31, 2009, 11:24:34 AM
scream as loud as you can
until your bones

break your lungs

i think this is the most bizarre line, but i find that i like bizarre :heart:

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~child-proof Jan 31, 2009, 11:28:51 AM
i rather like this a lot
(but then again, i have yet to find something you write that i do not like)

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"is the search for god absurd?"
"it is if everyone dies alone."
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