Wow this is brilliant, as always.
It's so descriptive and your choice of words are extremely effective.

I'm sorry to hear drugs have touched your life negatively. I've lost a friend or two to it. Not like they died, just sort of turned their back on me once they started doing it D:

But anyways, I'm always excited to see what new deviations there are when I sign on. And even more thrilled when I see they're by you Keep up the utmost fantabulous work :3

Amazing description.
I'm sorry to hear that drugs have been included in your life as well. I nearly lost my cousin to them :/
But this work is fantastic...

another beautiful piece. powerful, and I love the repetition, and yet, complete differences between the parts...

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We lie beneath the sea, stars lapping at our feet. I lie to you; you lie to me; we lie beneath the sea.

See?

drugs fucking suck.

but this doesn't
at all
one bit
in the least/slightest
: D because you fucking rock.

This is amazing. Everything is so clear.

Amazing, simply clear

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-yes your exactly my brand of heroin
-Do i dazzle you
-and so the lion fell in love with the lamb...
Edward !

My wish is for every one who took drugs to read this so they could realise that they are killing themselves

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The moon has wings thats how it flies

Meee: [link]

My sis: [link]

Do you dare challenge me??? [link]

Beautiful.

That is so well put. Amazing and intriguing piece of literature. I love the reoccurring theme you created and just the pure genius you mastered with this

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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'

This poem is very strong and moving in many respects. The best of it is the tender, vivid imagery and the delicate wording: your way with symbolism and comparison is striking in many lines. ("Her eyes were like blots of india ink painted onto yellowed parchment..." and other gems.) But the poem also suffers from being too direct about a contrived (serious, yes, but still contrived) subject. The blunt outing of "weed the drug" being the conflict detracts from constructions in the poem that are beautiful and fragile. Alluding to the drug problem through subtle wording/symbolism rather than using obvious diction such as "get high" and "plastic baggies" can make it more emotionally powerful. You've got a great way with sensory detail and setting up an effective backdrop to your writing. The poem is stunning in some parts--good job and keep writing.

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Someone took a bite out of my melon.